Quick question


I didn’t get any feedback on my writing about Alice. Did it not come across very well? Is something I need to work on?

Somebody tell me something!

Don’t be afraid to give me any negative feedback, I want to be able to improve my work and listening to critics is a good start 🙂

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2 thoughts on “Quick question

  1. It is. Both my stories yesterday were about her, but only one told her name… Just noticed, LOL! What once was lost is the longer one. I am just trying to get into her head to help me write the most difficult conversation she has ever had with someone. Thank you for the comment 🙂

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