I wrote this in response to fandango’s flash fictionchallenge
Tiny Tuesday – Going up
“My feet hurt,” Cheryl complained. “How much further?”
“We’ll be there soon,” Daniel replied patiently. “You’re the one wearing heels.”
“Sorry for not expecting to climb a mountain to our holiday home. You bought the house at the top, didn’t you?”
“It was you who wanted a view.”
I love it! Seems perfect for a newly wed couple. She’s wearing heels and he thought he was doing a great thing and that she would be so happy.
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I can imagine it being a newlywed couple, but I can also see it as a couple that have been together for quite a long time… It has that bickering sense! Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Yes, you are right. Sometimes the longer you are with someone the fights go back to that ridiculous stuff that really doesn’t matter, like directions.
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Lol 😂😂
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A view always comes with a price. Good tale.
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Glad you enjoyed it 🙂 Thank you for reading, commenting, and hosting.
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This is where one takes one’s shoes off. She will forgive him when they get to the top.
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Oh yes, the views are going to be absolutely amazing from the top of wherever that is! Thanks for reading and commenting.
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You are very welcome.
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Ohhh the pain she must have felt. At least she was polite despite the discomfort
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Yes, it probably hurt but then it is one of those situations you can’t help but blame the person. Dress appropriately and all that! Thanks for reading and commenting.
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